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Post by denay2 on Jul 10, 2009 0:41:04 GMT -5
There I was, standing on the balcony of my house in the mist village when suddenly i heard something. I went to check it out and it was none other than Anko, a leaf ninja special jounin. "Who are you and what do you want with my village," I said, Anko replied, "I have a special assignment to capture you and take you back to my village for interrogation." "I will not go without a fight," I said. "Well then, bring it on pretty boy," Anko said. "Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu" Anko dodged. "Ninja Art: Shadow Snake Jutsu." I countered with my, "Water Style: Water Wall Jutsu." Anko used her, "Summoning Jutsu," and she summoned a giant snake. I tried to counter with, "Water Style: Giant Vortex Jutsu," but it didn't work, then Anko's giant snake bit off right leg, I fell and used, "Water Style: Water Shark Bomb," but it had no effect then, Anko's giant snake bit my arm and put a giant hole in it and induced its venom i lay there cold and dieing and i used my final jutsu "Summoning Jutsu" and i summoned a giant golden bird, and then the giant bird used "Wind Style: Maximum Wind Velocity," and after that the bird grabbed Anko with its claws then I threw an exploding tag at Anko then I used, "Exploding Tag: Activate," and anko had died, but I was slowly dieing from the snake's venom, and then I shriveled up and lay on the bird dead.
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Post by d-boys on Jul 10, 2009 1:03:04 GMT -5
Flow: 50% Grammar: 75% Spelling: 90% (lower case I's) Character: 85%
You have passed as rank chuunin, and can now go on to create a character, jutsu, and more.
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